Marcus: yes when you first look at it because when you first look at it you can see pictures of punk people and a kind of mischievous urban background.
Me: how much money would you pay for my magazine based on its presentation?
Marcus: when looking at the magazine i would say that it is around £1.50-£2
Me: is my magazine informative?
Marcus: Yes the magazine is informative because it includes actual facts about skin heads and punks
Me:is there some improvements i could do towards my work?
Marcus:to be honest there isn't that much that i would change because everything there looks like it has a purpose
Me: what do you think about the colors in my spread?
Marcus: The colors in the spread fit the magazine well because of what it's about because i couldn't really imagine the spread in a bright yellow or green
Me: do you have any ideas of what you would put in it?
Marcus: yes i would say that you could get a picture of a punk band playing and use that in your magazine
Me: what is the best feature on the page?
Marcus: The best feature of the magazine is that when looking at the magazine you can see that time and effort have been used to make the magazine because you want to appeal to your target audience
Me: what is the worst thing about my magazine?
Marcus: The worst thing is that you only have two pictures on your double page spread
Me: lastly, do you think this looks appealing to the target audience?
Marcus:Yes the magazine does look appealing to the target audience and if i was in to punk and skin heads i would definitely buy the magazine to read because of how interesting it looks
extra comment if necessary: Not that much bad things to say about the magazine mostly positive and if i could rate this then i would give you a 8/10
There are some good questions which if acted upon in your final draft will have made the focus group task worthwhile. Try to ensure that whilst trying to meet the TA expectations you don't lose those elements which have been successful.
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