you have made some good points. you need to ensure that you are using correct ML so for instance 'Punk fan' can be replaced with TA. I especially liked the point made on font spacing and the chaos and anarchy associated with punks. the use of the central image needs to be extended: mode of address and the way the image interacts with the viewer needs to be explained. The labelling isn't complete though - refer back to your resources from class.- DG
you have made some good points. you need to ensure that you are using correct ML so for instance 'Punk fan' can be replaced with TA. I especially liked the point made on font spacing and the chaos and anarchy associated with punks. the use of the central image needs to be extended: mode of address and the way the image interacts with the viewer needs to be explained. The labelling isn't complete though - refer back to your resources from class.- DG
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